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J ai créé un poéme et j aimerez savoir si il y a des fautes et si il est bien merci d avance
Why were you gone?
Is that what you were afraid ?
I wasn't With another
I loves secretly
But you thought
You was just my best friend
But m'y friends chip
Is changing in love
I do not care to say that the orther
My heart beats for you
And you Know
Baby i love you



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Why were you gone?
Is that what you were afraid ?
I wasn't With another
I loves secretly
But you thought
You was just my best friend4
But my friends chip
Is changing in love
I do not care to say that the orther
My heart beats for you
And you Know
Baby i love you


Why were you gone?
Were you afraid ?
I wasn't with another
I loved secretly.
But you thought
You was just my best friend
But my feeling for you
Changes into love
I don't care to say
That my heart beats for you
And you Know 
Baby i love you

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